1) Everything else. Forms are basic, gritty and useless.
2) Lighting is terrible and hurts the piece badly.
Overall, you are trying to copy other people and not doing a great job of it. There is no innovation here at all, its just replication without imagination. I'm sorry to be so harsh, but this just doesn't cut it. Create for yourself, create your own imagery.
i like this alot, highly unique style that really paid off i think i especially like the intergration of flowers into it, makes the piece even more appealing, and the overall main form is awesome. great work